Friday, June 21, 2019

pusausive writing

Speeches Would you like to just not do a speech. Well in my opinion i think that we should choose if we do a speech or not or we should just not do one. In my opinion i think that we should just not do one because the parents do all the work. Also it's not fun doing a speech so why do speeches when kids don't like doing them. Another reason is kids get nervous when they stand in front of the class. And to me it doesn't help anybody with their learning. So that's why I think we should not do a speech

by charli

Introduction
  • Opening question
Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons
  • Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts
Introduction
  • Opening question
Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons
  • Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts
I like that you persuasive writing you are doing it on speeches and you can pick what one you wanted to do like if you want to do it or not. Next time maybe you could write longer sentences. By mackenzie


I like how you have gave me a task to work on maybe next time you could make your feedback make more sense



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