Friday, July 30, 2021

Paragraph of the week

I heard the loud rumbling thunder above me as I walked down the street. The rain dripped off of me splashing onto the ground. I look up to see the blinding lightning flashing in the grey foggy sky, the wind so strong pushing me off the footpath. Down at the beach sand blows into my face as the rough waves crash against the soft sand.  

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Charli

    Hi I am Emma from Yaldhurst Model School in Christchurch. Your story sounds scary and nice. Hopefully you are not to close to the water. Did you make that picture or of the internet? If you made that you are a good drawer

    How long did it take you?

    From Emma!
    Bye

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  2. Hi Charli its Emily M from T3 at GMS you have done a really good job with your story next time maybe make add a little more sentences to your writing and say why you did it! other than that keep up the great work!

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